Teacher Analysis of our Initial Rough Cut

We had a talk with our teacher in the lesson today so that she could give us feedback on our ideas and how we could make our cut better and flow more. She has told us that after half term we should get some more footage of just me performing the whole song so that we can cut bits out of it and just use bits of it as filler shots to put in every now and then. She also said that we should rearrange a few of the shots so that it would make more sense to the viewer. She also said to us that we could include a split screen view to show the change in personalities, aswell as contrasting the colours.