S1-23 - a variety of locations will help boost the narrative and give it more interesting. Maybe if some girls chased him rather than boys it would work well so more actors on scene would help. Some of the shots need to be refilmed - the hate shot works really well but unfortunately you can see how it's happening, you maybe able to stretch it on final cut. Fits well with the genre and is fun and witty.
Artist representation - presented really well as the lead singer is the only person featured in the footage apart form extras, a large usage of lip syncing and performance .
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